Week 3 – Beginning Without Perfectionism

Jude S -

Hello all, this week has been probably my most productive yet! My mentor has given me multiple sources to investigate while I turn a short film I have written into a full-length project. There is a concept in screenwriting called multiple names, but one of the main ones is the ten-page rule (Calvisi). This is the rule that the turning point of your script should be on the tenth page. This is where the main character has the inciting incident that drives the rest of the world forward. Everything should be different for the character.

To gain a better understanding of this she had me read the beginning of the book Inferno by Jerry Pournelle and Larry Niven. The story starts with a start of ‘action’ (although not in the literal sense) where the main character talks about already being dead and then we see how he dies. With this, my mentor and I decided to start my screenplay part way through the beginning then flashback. Looking at other media gives a greater understanding of how stories can be crafted. Although there are many ways to write a story there are a few methods that are used in almost every story. My screenplay will be using a typical hero’s journey structure following two main characters taking place in the afterlife. I plan to keep reading and watching other media to get a better handle on how my story should play out.

I have created the start of my screenplay reaching and surpassing the important ten-page mark. I am also making storyboards so I don’t lose sight of my preproduction. All in all, the parts of the pre-production are coming together to make what should be a smooth production.

My film recommendation of the week is 20th Century Women (2016)

Citation:

Calvisi, Daniel P.. Story Maps: How to Write a Great Screenplay. United States, Act Four Screenplays, 2011.

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    adhip_j
    Jude, your project looks fascinating, and I can't wait for the final product!! Do you know why they say the tenth page specifically?
    thomas_c
    Hi Jude, I love seeing the development of your project, and I cannot wait to see the finished product! What other stories/media are you drawing inspiration from?
    elle_m_r
    Hi Jude! I love seeing the different rules/philosophies to film making you're learning! Is the 10 page rule specific to short films or does it change based on the length of the script? I am also curious about the genre of your film if you are willing to let me know and whether or not you have developed an ending?
    Anonymous
    Jude! I'm very glad to hear that you are making progress on your screenplay and learning more about the process and structure. Your ideas sound incredible, and I can't wait to hear more about how the story develops.
    jude_s
    Thank you, Adhip! There is no solid reason why it's on the tenth page beyond the fact that's when most script readers decide whether to continue reading. Script readers often have hundreds of screenplays to read, so catching their attention early on is important! It also allows the story to keep up pace and stay within a well known story structure.
    jude_s
    Hi Thomas! I am drawing inspiration from a number of sources like Good Omens, The Labyrinth, Beetlejuice Beetlejuice, Paprika, and A Scanner Darkly! I am taking multiple aspects from all of them including story structure, world-building, and humor!
    jude_s
    The 10-page rule applies most to feature-length scripts since they are the ones read by production companies most often. Shorter scripts would be proportionally the same, for example, if the 10-page rule applies to a 90-page script the conflict should instead start on the first page of a 9-page script. The genre I am most working with is irreverent comedy. I have developed a general ending and a character arc ending for one of the main characters, but I am still workshopping another character's ending.
    jude_s
    Thank you! I'm excited to keep exploring story structures in screenplays!

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